PDA

View Full Version : loneliness


silentsoul
01-29-2004, 10:55 PM
Hello, I’ve enjoyed Writing erotic stories for a few years now and recently a friend of a friend suggested that I try my hand at erotic fiction. I decided to have a go at it and this is my first attempt, “Loneliness.” Tell me what you think. Enjoy.

Chapter 1

Once again you find yourself standing alone in the dark. The loneliness lately has been unbearable. It seems like ages since you’ve felt the closeness of a man’s body, the strength of his touch, the warmth of his kiss, and the burning passion that burns for you and you alone. You stand looking out the window, gazing out upon the moonlit sea. You can feel the coldness of the window pane radiating onto your body. You wrap your arms around yourself subconsciously. It’s getting late and you close your eyes, trying to clear your thoughts so you can go to sleep. You listen to the world around you, it’s quiet, the soft moan of the wind against the window, the hypnotic beat of the clock, most nights this would almost immediately calm you but you need to feel someone, and to have someone feel you. You can’t be alone tonight and you start to wish that you weren’t.
You feel a gentle yet strong pair of hands lie upon your shoulder. You can feel the heat from his body. He moves his hand to your hair and softly slides it out of the way. You sense his lips getting closer and closer, your heart begins to beat hypnotically fast. At last you feel contact, his soft warm lips caress your neck. He kisses you and gently sucks on your neck, it’s been so long since you’ve felt this and your body is burning for it. The stimulation of your neck now has your blood boiling as well as racing. His lips begin to move. They travel slowly toward your ear. He takes his tongue and traces behind your ear ever so lightly, up to the top and then back down, just barely touching it, yet stimulating every nerve possible. Finally he gets to your earlobe and he gently sucks it into his mouth, flicking with his tongue while still slightly sucking on it. He then stops and lightly whispers “I want you, now!”
Your body melts and the feelings you feel are too intense to experience in a dream. You also suddenly realize that he really is there. Your mind is racing, blood boiling, you’ve wanted this so badly for so long. You feel his strong hands lead you to the bed. Slowly he lifts your shirt above your head and drops it on the floor beside him. He lays you down face first upon the bed and begins to give you a back massage. thing you’ve missed more than anything is the tenderness that he gave you. Your pleasure came first, every time. Slowly, massaging from the neck all the way down to the small of your back. Each time, his hands reach further and further toward your breasts. Soon his massage is focused upon your breasts. He removes your bra and begins again. He cups the bottom of your breasts in his hand and slightly squeezing from bottom to top. He lightly squeezes your nipple between his thumb and forefinger.
He rolls you over and straddles you hips. He removes his shirt and reveals his chest. It’s perfect in every way. He leans over and once again caresses your neck with kisses. As he’s kissing you he continues to squeeze and massage your breasts. This all feels so good and you never want it to end. He slowly begins to nibble upon your ear, flicking it and you can’t help but want his tongue to move lower. Almost as if you have a telepathic bond, it does. His tongue moves down your neck and to your collar bone. He makes love to your skin with his tongue as he slowly descends. He reaches your breasts and you find yourself pulling his head into you. His tongue circles your nipple, getting closer and faster with each pass. Eventually, his tongue reaches your nipple. He sucks it into his mouth and flicks it with his tongue while it’s there. As he pulls his mouth away, he applies slight pressure with his teeth leaving you with an incredible sense of pain and pleasure.
After stimulating your breasts for what seems like life times, he descends even more. Your body is on fire and you slowly direct his head lower. He’s just below your navel and you can barely stand it. He continues to make love to your skin but as he approaches the source of your erotic urgency, he migrates to the side. He moves his tongue to the inner part of your upper thigh. It’s obvious how much you want him and he knows that you’re his and his alone. Slowly, as if time did not exist, he passionately and slowly kisses your thigh. Again and again, you feel his lips touch you, sending shocks of electricity through your body. At last you find his tongue at the very top of your leg and he slowly spreads them apart. He licks every inch of your skin as he approaches your pleasure zone. His tongue reaches your panties, they are slim and sexy and you know he can taste you on them. The shear thought sends shivers through your body. He traces the outline with his tongue. That is all that exist to you. You feel the soft, strong, and wet texture of his tongue caress your skin. The warmth of it is unparallel. Finally he reaches the top, but he starts allover on your other legs. The anticipation is killing you but you wouldn’t dare wish for him to stop.
As he reaches the waist line of your panties for a second time, you feel him slip his fingers beneath each side. Slowly, he begins to pull on your panties, kissing your newly revealed skin. He slides his hand beneath the waist ban and massages your ass with his strong hands. As he gets lower, his fingers begin to migrate. As his fingers reach your pussy, he quickly slides his thumb over the front of your panties. You were not expecting this and the sudden stimulation sends chills up your spine. You gasp and instinctively arch your hips in a desperate attempt to maintain connection with his finger, but it is a futile attempt for his fingers are already gone. Quickly, he slides the only barrier between you and erotic pleasure off your body. Almost as it on cue, you look down and gain contact just as his tongue makes a trail from just above your anus to your clit, stopping there to flick it momentarily. You gasp and again arch your hips only this time, it is unneeded, his tongue has reached it’s destination and you know that you will experience complete, utter, and exotic bliss many times before he leaves. You close your eyes again and lean your head back just as you feel his tongue . . .

Chapter 2

. . . press itself into you. He spreads your lips with his fingers, exposing you to the fullest extent. The teasing is only a distant memory now and he attacks you with the lust that you both posses. While he holds your lips open with one hand, he slowly slides a finger from the other up and down your entrance applying increasing pressure.
Finally he enters you, throwing you into erotic bliss. He enters you with another finger and moves his head to your breasts. As he attacks your nipples with unrestrained lust, he slowly slides his fingers in and out of you, circling your clit with his thumb. He continues to do this and you find yourself squeezing his tongue into your breast. A soft moan escapes your lips. You can feel yourself surrounding his invading fingers. You can feel your erotic pleasure seeping from your body, lubricating his fingers. Your muscles pull and push his fingers into and out of you in an erotic, romantic rhythm. You sense a feeling building in the pit of your stomach that you’ve done so long without. He senses the closeness and he moves his head upward. He looks into your eyes, looking deep into your soul. You can feel his fingers applying more and more pressure, circling your clit faster and closer. Finally he leans down and kisses you passionately. His tongue enters your mouth, massaging your with his. Suddenly, he presses his tongue into yours hard, just as the circles that his thumb has been making finally stops. He applies direct pressure to your clit, pressing into it with a circular motion. You gasp over the sudden contact and you know that you’re on your way over the edge. Then, he presses his fingers deep inside you and curls them upward. He finds your g-spot and presses on it. It’s too much, the direct stimulation to your clit, your g-spot, the strong tongue forcing itself inside your mouth. Your orgasm rips through your body like a thunderous orgasmic storm. It takes your breath away as your muscles contract, pulling him deep inside you, holding him there. He continues to rub your clit as he pulls back to watch you as you go through the throes of orgasm.
Finally, the erotic storm that exploded inside of you starts to die down and you let out a long, hard moan. You open your eyes to see him watching you. He’s smiling upon you, knowing the pleasure you have just received. His fingers have stopped and he leans down to kiss you passionately. You wrap your arms around him pulling him close. He stops and rises his head away from yours. He looks deep into your eyes again, only this time he has a mischievous smile upon his lips. Finally he speaks and says, “Now it’s time for the real fun to begin.” As he says this, he simultaneously applies pressure to both your g-spot and your clit, making you gasp deeply.


Chapter 3

He rises from the bed and you have the chance to examine his entire body for the first time. Once again, you wonder if this is a dream. His hair, eyes, lips, and face are living examples of beauty. These few things would make you melt by themselves. You move lower, his broad neck, large shoulders, built arms, cut chest, and rippled abdomen all symbolize strength. You are completely and utterly mesmerized by his beauty. He stands, looking down upon you. The only clothes that remain are his casually fitting khakis and black leather belt. He moves his strong hands down to his belt and starts to remove it. His eyes are focused on you and only you. His belt is undone and quickly finds itself on the floor beside him. Slowly, he unbuttons the top buttons the top button of his pants. You know what is about to come. Your breathing quickens and nothing else in the world would matter His zipper falls and he starts pushing them down. He’s wearing white jockey shirts that doesn’t leave much to the imagination. He doesn’t wait for anything and immediately begins to lower his jockey.
As he slides them down he reveals what you’ve been waiting for. For the first time, you can physically see how much he wants you which makes you want him even more. After he steps out of his jockeys he stands there for a moment. Then he moves toward you. He lifts you to your feet. He cups your face in his and leans down to kiss you. His tongue invades your lips, massaging your tongue with his. While you both enjoy kissing, your body as well as his is crying out for something more. He steps back and admires your body, He starts to run his finger tips up and down the sides of your body. This part of your body is rarely touched directly and this sudden attack stimulates endless numbers of nerves. Finally he pulls you close, you can feel his manhood pressing into your body. He directs you not to the bed but with your back to the wall next to it.
It’s almost as if a switch has been flipped, up until now he has been calm, slow, and methodical in every movement. Now, however, a sudden wave of lust seemed to wash over him. He raises your hands above your head, pressing you against the wall. He moves them together and holds them there with his left hand. Het them moves his right hand down your body, He kisses you passionately as he moves his fingertips down your arm and side. When he’s halfway down, he stops. He ends the kiss and cups your breast in his hand, squeezing your nipple between his thumb and index finger. He lowers his mouth and flicks your nipple with his tongue. The sudden lust urges your body to beg for more and you are close to that point as well. Then he brings his lips to your ear and says in a husky yet sexy voice “I can’t hold back any more, I have to have you!”
He moves his free hand down to your left and lifts it up. He slides his body close and he places his manhood in a position so that the length of him is against the wall and he can control every vertical movement that you make slowly, he lowers you onto himself. He enters to the point just past his head. He holds you there letting you get accustomed to being stretched to the fullest extent. Finally, he proceeds to lower you. It seems lifetimes since you were last with a man leaving you extremely tight. You can feel his powerful muscle invade your tight canal. Your wet silky skin surrounds him, squeezing him tightly. You can feel every vein, every fold of skin, every measurement of movement. He fills you so completely, stretching you to a point your forgot possible. Sliding in, stretching you, filling your entire body with erotic pleasure. Finally, He bottoms out and you feel his pubic hairs press against your clit. Finally you are able to breathe once again and you take a long, deep breath. Your head is tilted back and your eyes closed but you open them to find him looking deep inside you. He kisses you slowly as he begins to withdraw.

Chapter 4

You bring your hands down to his neck. As the kiss ends, you open your eyes and you look deeply into his. You feel him withdraw to the point of just barely having his engorged head inside you. He supports you by grabbing your ass. He begins to enter you again this time a little faster. As he enters you, a moan of ecstacy escapes from your lips. Hearing this, his lust takes over and he pins you against the wall and move his left hand to the back of your head as he attacks your mouth with his. You lustfully kiss open mouthed as he begins to set a good rhythm pounding in and out of you. Having his massive rod plow in and out of you kept you in the highest state of arousal. He moves his head back and looks into your eyes as he moves his left hand down to your mound. He begins to circle your clit with his thumb as he ravages your pussy. The electrical sparks that signal the beginning of an earth shattering orgasm begins to spread throughout your body. You look down and seeing his tool sliding in and out of your stretched pussy, glistening with your more than liberal juices, it’s all just more than you can bear and your orgasm overwhelms you. You clamp down with your muscles as you look each other in the eye through out the entire orgasm.
At this point he moves you to the bed and lays you face down. He slides a couple pillows under your hips so that your ass is sticking up just a bit. He straddles you and enters you from behind. You feel him begin to position his cock at your entrance when you reach between your legs and grab hold. You feel his throbbing manhood is your hands slick with you own juices. You move his head to your entrance and hold your lips open with your two fingers. You can feel him slide across your fingers as he enters you and being so exposed, every time he bottomed out his balls would slap your clit. Gradually he would go faster and faster until every touch was a blur. Then as the built-up lust finally took control, you began to talk. “Oh my god, that feels so good, oh yes, fuck me harder, let me feel that big dick stretch me to my limits!” Hearing and saying this increased the furiousness even more. Soon his pounding’s were a blur and you were screaming for release. Then suddenly, without warning you exploded into a screaming orgasm. You began thrusting your hips upwards, bucking your hips up to get every inch possible into your pussy. As he feels your orgasm squeeze his dick and looking down and seeing a perfectly heart shaped ass bouncing up and down on his cock was more than he could stand. Quickly he tells you he’s about to cum and you respond by looking over your shoulder with an erotic smile and begins to frantically jerk your hips up and down. You move your hands back and spread your cheeks as he pounds frantically into you. He looks down and sees in explicit detail his oversized dick moving in and out of your pussy. However when he realized your asshole puckered out on each inward thrust he lost all control and let pure unadulterated lust take over as he slams into as deep as possible, shooting torrent after torrent of hot cum deep inside you.
Your orgasm takes over to the point of hearing a ringing in your ears. The ringing grows louder and louder until you suddenly open your eyes. You suddenly realize that you had been awakened from the best dream of your life by a phone call. You answer the phone still trying to get a grasp on everything to find that it is a telemarketer. You quickly give them an angry “fuck you!” before hanging up the phone. You lay back and try to drift off again but it’s no use, you’re awake for good. You instinctively slide your hand down to cup your pussy only to find cum leaking from your red and abused pussy. Being completely puzzled you can only say one thing “what a fucking dream!” You then proceed to finger yourself to orgasm before heading off to the shower to prepare for the day ahead.

To all my fans: I’m sorry this has taken so long to finish but I hope you’re happy with the end result. I’m kinda hoping this story will change the meaning of “sweet dreams” for anyone who reads it. And with that, sweet dreams to everyone.