GREAT story!!! I loved it!!! I stayed glued to my computer, reading your story for about an hour and a half. A lot of stories are never so well thought out and with wording that fits... And people at collage said I was a good writter... I should print out your story and prove to them that I'm not the only writter out there... Well, anyways, great job!!! I can't wait till I can find another one of your stories. ((I'm still browsin' and I dunno if you made another yet.)) Good luck on your other stories!!! I'm sure they'll be just as good.