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Old 04-18-2003, 03:29 PM
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In a word... Sexy!

SEXXXY!

How do you always manage to find a way to incorporate my fantasies and sexual passions into your stories. I swear you read my mind right before you write a story!

This time you managed to include:
spur-of-the-moment - "I see that quick flashing smile as your crass words register in my brain …"
desire to please - "...bringing you pleasure brings me so much pleasure!"
grabbing the ass/legs around waist - "...then you stand, cupping my butt as my legs wrap tight around your waist…"

The more I read your stories the more I notice how much attention you pay to the smaller details too. You make sure to complete the imigiary, while leaving room for imagination. True brilliance! This sentence is the perfect example:
"I lean down, bringing my chest in your direct line of vision, the deep v-neckline of the t-shirt pulls free from my body and I know you have a good view of the lacy edges of my demi-cup bra, nipples covered, but the rosy circles surrounding them are a bit on display."

What can I say, you are a true writer. One who knows how to give your readers just what they desire.
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