awwww~ I have been reading this story with my fave cohort and now he has to wait til Monday for the conclusion:p

You are able to capture both emotion and detail without sounding like a "how-to" pamphlet. Which is something I struggle with in my scribbles.

You also describe something that has been a serious issue when I have fantasized about a 3 way and that is the idea of no-one feeling left out. Great ideas, if the situation ever should present itself;)

Excellent story! Bookmarking it:p

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