04-27-2015, 04:18 PM
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Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Iowa, US
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Originally Posted by Lilith
There is a weak mystery woven through but a quick dirty read.
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Yup, dirty read is what I was going for .... and would have liked it if kept as is, but the extra storyline is, kind of, just fluff. |