A wonderful and well written story I'm sure that it will be added to the site permanently. The style is quite similar to the writing of Maxime. I do hope that you will write another it is obvios that you put a lot of thought into your work. I just discovered this site 3 days ago ill be sure to post some of my own work that's been gathering dust on the old hard-drive. Keep up the excellent work!

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