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Old 05-20-2003, 09:10 PM
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I loved this story! The idea of writhing between men is such a damn turn on. Well written and erotic!
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Old 05-30-2003, 07:34 PM
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What a turn on......damn i wanna bus ride like that
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Old 05-30-2003, 07:45 PM
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Thanks so much for replying. I've been a little disappointed to not get more response to the stories. As long as I know someone gets pleasure from them, I am encouraged to write more.
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The story of one woman, 5 guys and a ride to remember.

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A little office interlude.

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Old 06-03-2003, 06:35 PM
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I hope you do very hot. So how do I find this shuttle bus? Hope that you continue.
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Old 06-03-2003, 06:55 PM
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Damn! Excellent story!
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Old 06-19-2003, 01:57 PM
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I loved the story! It was incredibly hot and you write really well. The description was vivid, the way the action progressed was fluid. I imagined myself in the wife's position and it was an amazing turn-on, to be taken like that and still have control. Keep writing!
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