It has been a long time since I wrote an erotic story, wasn't even sure I knew how to anymore. Still a bit unsure if I do! Any comments are welcome.

fzzzy
Your Story was really good.and very hot!

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I love the night
I love the element of danger and the ecstasy of flight,
I love the night
I love to dance with a stranger and to feel his delight,
And when the dancing is through, I kick off my shoes,
And I listen to the beating of his heart

Thanks Rhiannon, I'm glad you enjoyed it, like I said, it's been a long time since I wrote my last erotic story, so it's good to hear the positive comment.

Great work fzzy. So nice to see you writing erotica again.

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Lil .... Good to see you've kept things up to your impecable standards! Thanks, this story in my head kept my eyes sparkling anyway, glad it seemed to have translated to print reasonably well. X's