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Old 01-22-2018, 03:31 AM
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A Vision of Life

Feeling a bit of dreamer this morning, I wrote this.
Not really erotic, but, I hope you enjoy anyway.


If the temps are feeling warmer,
If the sun is shining bright.
If the bushes have started budding,
If the air is crisp and bright.

If the birds are chirping happily,
If the bunnies run to and fro.
If the chipmunks are playing in the yard,
If the squirrels are on the go.

If the deer are grazing in the meadow,
If the cows are in the fields,
If the horses are in their stables,
If the hay stacks reveal their yield.

If the world seems bright and peaceful,
When two lovers walk the lane,
Their smiles and disposition,
Put movie love scenes all to shame.

I think this must be how God had wanted
The world to really be,
Everything in its place,
With peace eternally.

If only we were smarter,
If only we were wise,
This might be how life could be,
Heaven beneath blue skies.

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Old 01-23-2018, 07:51 PM
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It would be something to see. I wonder if the world would know what to do with no fighting, no pollution, no greed, no stealing, a lot of service people out of work, the list is long. Wouldn't it be nice.
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Old 01-25-2018, 03:13 AM
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It sure would. Thanks TB.

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