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Old 01-27-2006, 03:04 AM
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She Was Late - by bobbachman

I have to say I LOVED this story! Well written and atmospheric, as well as a very sexy idea.

I hope this encourages you to write more of the same!


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Old 02-23-2006, 07:30 PM
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Thankyou

I didnt realise this thread was here, but thankyou for your kind words.

I am amazed that anyone has read this story, let alone liked it because it was written as a kind of challenge to myself. Because people like it though, I am going to continue writing. I just need a little inspiration and I'll post again.

Once again, thanyou for your kind words and support.
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A great first story, but the second one I've found of your's. A most erotic and exciting unfolding of a man's fantasy. I hope you find lot's more inspiration and then direct some my way!
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