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Old 04-12-2003, 03:02 PM
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Angel - the beginning

Max arrived at the hospice and asked at the reception about his uncle. He gave them the name, and they told him the room he was staying in. It was a private room, Max's uncle was rich enough to pay for that. Max smiled at the receptionist as he made his way to the room.

Max arrived at the room just as a nurse was leaving. He nodded and went to open the door. The nurse hesitated, then seemed to take a breath and spoke.

"Excuse me sir, but only family are allowed in there." she said, avoiding his gaze.

"It's OK nurse, I'm his nephew." Max said with his most charming smile. She was certainly pretty, fairly young, petite. Her green eyes flickered nervously looking up at him.

"Oh I'm sorry sir.....that's fine, just go right in....." she stammered.

"Thank you nurse.......?" he said, still smiling.

"Oh, I'm not a nurse, I'm just an aide." she said, slightly embarrassed.

"Your name...." Max said with kind eyes.

"Ohh....everyone just calls me Angel, sir." she said, eyes cast to the floor.

"Angel, I should have known." Max said, with a slight grin.

Angel looked confused as she looked up at him. For the first time, she saw him clearly. He was average height and build, with kind but confident eyes. They seemed to see everything, even those things that were not visible. She felt vulnerable, as if all her thoughts were visible to him; but at the same time, she felt a warmth and compassion from him. She realised he was speaking again.

"What else would you be called?" he said.

Angel blushed brightly, and looked back at the floor. She felt her body tingle, and she wasn't entirely sure it was from her embarrassment. He moved slightly and she looked up again. He smiled and went in to the room, closing the door behind him. Angel was still flustered slightly, and went get some water. Slowly, she drank from the cup, still feeling a tingle running through her. She went to the washroom to wash her face. She splashed some water on her face. She noticed for the first time how hot she was. How could he have this effect on her? She had only seen him once. She looked around, nobody else was in the washroom. She undid her pants and slid her hand down inside her panties. She found her clit, it was soaked. She touched it. She came hard. A soft moan left her lips as her juices flooded out over her panties and finger. She stood breathing heavily for a few moments, then did her pants back up and washed her hands.

Angel came out of the washroom just as the nurse she helped walked by. She looked up at the nurse.

"Ah there you are Angel, we've done for the day now, thanks for all your help." the nurse said.

Angel nodded and mumbled her thanks, her hormones still racing through her body. Just then, Max walked out of the room where his uncle was staying. She followed him as he left the hospice and into the car park. When they were outside, Max looked round at her.

"Hello again, Angel." he said with a smile.

She jumped and looked up at him. He smiled at her as his eyes peered into her soul.

"Hi..." she eventually managed to say.

"My uncle said you've been really sweet and helpful." Max said, "Is there anything I can do for you? A lift, dinner?"

"Fu....." she stammered. Oh god, did she really nearly say that? Her pussy felt on fire again. She felt she would do anything for this man. She thought quickly, her mind a blur.

"Funny you should ask." she said, "My car has broken down........" she looked away, this was a complete lie, but she didn't want him to leave her.

"Well, I'll give you a lift, where do you want to go?" he asked sincerely.

"Food..." she stammered again.

"Well, I have to get back to feed my cat. We can get takeout and head back to my place if you like?" he said.

"Yes!" she said.

She thought of his hands on her body. Her pussy flooded once more, she shifted slightly, the tight uniform pants pressed on her clit, and she came again. She felt dizzy. She felt a hand on her arm.

"Are you ok?" Max asked.

Her face was flushed as she felt a damp spot spread on her panties. She nodded, and he took her arm and guided her to his car. A few minutes later, they were getting pizza. A few minutes after that, they were at his place. They sat in relative silence as they ate pizza. The cat came out, looked at Angel, then scurried away to one of its hiding places. Angel looked at Max questioningly.

"It's ok, she's like that with new people." he said smiling.

"Oh..." she said, "Well, I guess that's ok...."

"You seem uncomfortable Angel, would you like me to take you home?" he asked, with slight concern in his voice.

"No sir!" she said, almost immediately.

"It's Max...." Max said smiling once more.

"Yes si...Max." she said.

"You are very pretty Angel." Max said, "You don't mind me saying that, do you?"

"No Max." she said, her eyes downcast.

"Do you feel you are pretty?" he pressed.

"No Max." she replied, in the same tone.

He reached out for her hand, and took it in his.

"Do you have anything to get home for?" he asked, insinuatingly.

"No." she shook her head. This was at least the truth. She lived in a small apartment of her own, in one of the cheaper parts of the city.

"Well, I'm not expecting anyone. Want to see what's on the TV?"

"Sure." she nodded. She wanted to spend as much time as she could with Max.

Max turned on the TV and flicked through channels. News, documentary, cartoon... They watched the cartoon for a few moments, both laughing at the antics on screen. Max flicked, it was a porn flick.

"Sorry." Max said, and moved to switch channels.

Angel watched the TV closely. A young girl was naked, on her back, as a large cock penetrated her pussy. She moaned intently as she was pumped.

"You like this?" Max asked.

Angel nodded slightly. Her juices flowed freely again. She usually masturbated to orgasm at least four times a day; her sex drive was insatiable. There was only one thing. She was still a virgin. The girl was moaning more on the TV screen now.

"I want to be yours." Angel suddenly said.

"Mine Angel? There are different ways to be mine." Max said, with a serious look. "Do you want me to be a lover, or a master?"

"A master? What would I do?" Angel said. Really, she just wanted to be taken, right there, right that moment.

"If I was your master, you would have to be obedient." Max said, slowly.

Angel barely nodded, her pussy now dripping again.

"Are you wet Angel?" Max asked.

Angel nodded slightly again.

"Do you want me Angel?" he asked.

Angel nodded.

"I'm a ...... I've never been with a man." she said.

Max smiled, and simply moved towards her, lifting her shirt over her head. Her D cup breasts were encased in a white silk bra. Angel sat motionless, her mind whirling.

"Take off your bra Angel." Max instructed.

Slowly, she removed her bra. She dropped her hands to her sides, and her eyes fell to the floor.

"You have beautiful breasts Angel." Max said

Slowly, he reached forwards, stroking a nipple with his finger. Angel gasped slightly as a spasm shook her young body.

"Does that feel good Angel?"

Angel nodded. Slowly, Max stood her to her feet. He undid her pants, dropping them to the floor. Her white silk panties followed, revealing her neatly trimmed pussy to his gaze. Angel stood timidly before him, her hands by her sides. She felt a trickle of moisture run from her pussy down her thigh. She stepped almost unconsciously out of her panties and stood before the man that she knew now would be her master. Slowly, Max slid his finger over her clit, massaging it. Angel closed her eyes and tilted her head back slightly, a soft moan coming from her throat. She felt so good. His hands seemed to know her body intimately. They drove her relentlessly to another orgasm. Her breathing quickened slightly, her moans became slightly louder and more insistent.

"Does Angel want to cum?" Max asked.

Angel nodded.

"Let me hear you say it." Max demanded softly.

"Please let me cum..." she said softly, pleadingly.

"You may cum Angel." Max said, smiling.

Angel let herself go. She came harder than she had done in her life, her juices flooding over Max's hand and fingers. She felt wonderful. Her chest heaved as she panted. She felt her body on fire. Her breasts rose and fell steadily. Slowly, she returned to something resembling normality. Max smiled up at her as she stood before him.

"Was that good Angel?" he asked.

She nodded slightly.

"Are you my master?" she asked him.

"If you give yourself to me, I am your master Angel." he said, with a serious tone.

"I give myself to you." she said.

Max smiled and pulled her down onto his lap. She cuddled against him, for the first time in her life she felt safe, secure, and loved by a man for what she was. She was a woman. She was his woman.
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Old 04-12-2003, 03:40 PM
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Sweet, sweet story! Enjoying this series;)
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Old 04-12-2003, 05:41 PM
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i am happy to hear that everyone enjoys the stoies of madmax67 and me. there will be more stories to this story. *prods max to hurry with another beautiful story about us* :D

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Old 04-12-2003, 05:47 PM
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*prods angel back...with something big and hard* :p
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Old 04-12-2003, 05:51 PM
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ohhhhhhhh yeahhhhhhhh
*pounces madmax67's something big and hard. ;)
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Old 04-15-2003, 06:57 AM
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Excellent story Max..............as usual. ;) :D

Looking forward to more stories in the series...:)
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Old 04-15-2003, 06:59 AM
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ty sugar...don't worry, much more to cum :D
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Terrific story!!

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Old 04-15-2003, 12:40 PM
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hadn't been on the forums a week even and I have already discovered the wonderful MAX/angel stories. I love them.
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Old 10-27-2003, 02:08 PM
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ty SuccubusKitty, i am glad you enjoyed our stoies, hopefully. *pokes Max* there will be more soon :D
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Old 10-27-2003, 04:03 PM
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WOW! I have to say that is a very good story. I liked it very much. Hope to read more.
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