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Old 06-14-2004, 07:13 PM
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My Daughter's Girlfriend by LarryL

Excellent first effort, Larry!! Your story was very..............uh...........shall I say, stimulating.


Please don't let this be your only offering!!!!


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Old 06-14-2004, 08:32 PM
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Keep it up, LarryL.....the writing that is. You're very good with words, that's for sure!

Such a great guy, we're lucky to have you with us at Pixies!
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Old 06-16-2004, 12:20 AM
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Sugarsprinkles / Imaginewithme,

Thank you. I wrote that largely because you prompted me to. It has been many, many years since a woman has encouraged me to do more than "clean up your diet." (You can guess from whom that quote comes.)

This internet world is blowing me away. On the one hand, you are but words on a screen typed at an earlier time in far away places. Then again, you are life-giving, passionate, sensitive, and caring women living both far away and in my heart. With the wonder of words, the amazing human language zapped through space in code, gigabites, drives, and mysterious little chips, we somehow touch each other. We give a little bit of who we are in an inconceivable way both knowing that a real connection exists.

It does not blow me away like a hit of window pane once did, but it does mess with my head a bit. I like it. It feels good. The second to last thing I will say is that the time I have spent writing this is time I have spent with you. The last thing is this:

Loving you Big Time,
Larry
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Old 06-16-2004, 06:34 AM
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You just blow me away with your words, every time I read one of your posts!

I agree, (though you already know) that the story was wonderful! I do hope to see more from you
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Old 06-17-2004, 11:30 PM
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That was hot Larry. I once had the hots for a girl friend's dad and that story reminded me of that. No we never did but I used to look at him and I even caught him looking at me in a not so fatherly way a few times.

I had to read your story since you made me laugh so much on the greeting you gave to me.

Now lets see some more.
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Old 06-17-2004, 11:33 PM
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Old 06-19-2004, 02:01 PM
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Excellent story and great storytelling .... always great to have another author join the ranks!!!
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Old 08-01-2004, 07:07 PM
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Larry, very story. Good job.
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Old 12-18-2005, 10:58 PM
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yes this is realy good would like to hear more of this thank you
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