Forward: I have never written erotica before joining Pixies Place. I have enjoyed posting small segments of sexual activity, and find I like doing this. Imaginewithme and naugtyangel have encouraged me to try writing an erotic story. So here one is.
Be kind if you do respond to this since it is my first effort. I must admit, however, as fearful as I am about negative feedback, still I want some sort of response from someone.
Please read. I hope you enjoy. If you get at all aroused, great. Please let me know what you think.

Yours in Lust and Desire, Larry.

Confused and hesitant, even doubting this is where Tina lived although certain it was, Susie asked the man who answered her knock at the door, “Is Tina home?”

“No,” he said, “she had to run down to the store for some smokes. She told me you might stop by and asked me let you in if you wanted to wait for her to return. She should be back in about five or ten minutes. I’m her father, Larry,” he said with a pleasant smile extending his hand for a shake. Susie gave him a very formal handshake saying, “OK. I’ll wait a few minutes if you’re sure it’s alright.”

“Yes, yes, of course. Come in please.” As Susie passed, Larry smelled the sweet scent of Jasmine in her hair. Susie was a very pretty young lady, slender, wearing just a tight white T-shirt and a pair of very loose red shorts. She had her back to him now as she walked across the room to sit down. He could barely take his eyes off her splendid, supple, tight ass. Then he stared at her long, smooth legs beginning just below the bottom of her butt, sliding down those taut, scrumptious thighs, over her perfect calves, to her bare little feet with yellow toenails.

(Larry really liked female calves. Sometimes, when his partner would lie on her stomach, he would slide his hand up and down, up and down her calves. When stimulated, he would startle her naked body, lower his hard penis in between her silky calves, and begin rocking, sliding back and forth along her warm calves. This allowed him to nuzzle her wondrous butt, to kiss her butt cheeks, to suck on her butt cheeks, while fucking her calves faster and faster, licking all over her butt, Ohhh, hungry, probing in dark places, fucking, and fucking, until he cums all over her legs.)

“Such a sweetie pie,” he thought, as Susie turned to sit on the sofa. With her sitting, and him standing, her breasts became center focus. God, they were gorgeous. Not wearing a bra, Larry could see the shape of her breasts. They were not super large but perfectly shaped. Her nipples and large dark areolas were visible through her thin top. He was definitely getting excited.

“I’m Tina’s dad. I came over to wish her a happy twenty-first birthday. She said her friend was taking her out dancing to celebrate. You must be that friend.”

“Yes,” Susie said, “I’m Susie. Tina and I are very close friends.” She gave the word “very” an accent, and he could swear she winked quickly right after saying that. “This is a very comfortable couch,” she said as she adjusted her position by wiggling her butt into the sofa, pushing her boobs out, and twisting her upper body back and forth a few times.

“Can I get you something to drink—water, cola, beer, a glass of wine?”

“Sure, a cold beer sounds good, in a glass please.”

“Coming right up,” he said turning toward the kitchen. His thoughts began to move toward the lust building inside. “Young girls are beautiful,” he thought. “I love their hard, young bodies with perky tits. I love their butts, so firm, so nice. And the way their tight virginal pussy grips your dick like a vice and milks every last drop of cum from your cock…Ahhhh. Shit, she looks good.”

When Larry returned to the living room, Susie was across the room looking at his computer screen. His first flash thought was, “Oh my god,” but then he thought this might give him just the opportunity he wanted. Tina saw the porno Larry had been looking at before she arrived. She was staring at a full-screen picture of a girl’s ass just after anal intercourse. The girl was on her hands and knees, and the shot was from behind. A gob of white sperm was dribbling out of her ass and running down into her pussy. The man’s simi-limp cock was resting on the top of the girl’s backside with some cum still dripping out. Susie was not a virgin, but had very little sexual experience, and had never even considered anal intercourse, so she was surprised to feel her panties get a tiny bit damp. That picture was fascinating.

“O, here. Let me, ah, shut that down,” he said reaching for the mouse.”

“No! Stop,” she barked. “Don’t shut it off. Do people really do that sort of thing?” Susie asked staring wide-eyed at the screen. “I mean, in the butt hole?”

“Well, yah, they do,” answered Larry. “Some people find anal intercourse—and, other things--very enjoyable.” He started getting very aroused looking at and talking with this young, hot girl in a skimpy outfit with a body to die for about pornography. “Have you ever looked at porno before,” he asked.

“No, but it is fascinating,” she said. “Can I…well…is there any more…uh…I mean, are there other pictures?” Just then, her eyes were so big and innocent.

“Yes, there’s more,” he replied, “but, I don’t know if I should be showing this to you. And Tina could walk in anytime.” He then clicked to the main directory with categories like Natural Breasts, Teenage Action, Mature, and Cream Pies, etc. She pointed to the screen touching Teenage Action, saying simply, “That one.”

“OK. Here goes.” Larry clicked one picture after another, each one showing a beautiful, young girl posing with her legs spread wide open, with breasts exposed, or having sex. Susie kept staring at the screen one picture after another almost in a trance repeating, “They’re just like me; they’re just like me.” Then he couldn’t believe what she did next. Susie was sitting. She spread her legs open, reached in under the side of her panties, and started rubbing her pussy. Larry reached down and fondled her breast. She just moaned. He reached in under her T-shirt and squeezed her boobs. Finding no resistance, he pulled at the bottom of her T-shirt up until she quickly raised both arms allowing it to come off completely, and there were those two scrumptious boobs. She shot her hand back down to her pussy and continued rubbing, flicking her knob, dipping her fingers in her wet cunt. She started breathing heavy and fast and he knew she was reaching orgasm. He got down on his knees and starting sucking hard on her tits. She keep going faster and faster, and he kept sucking harder and harder until she let out a loud “OOOOOOHHHHHHH” and drenched her fingers in her own juices.

Larry was practically out of his mind. He couldn’t believe what was happening. My God. It was too much. Susie looked at him kinda wild-eyed and said, “Fuck me. Fuck me.” He swung around in front of her. He grabbed her shorts and started pulling them down. She arched her back and he pulled her shorts and panties off in one move. Putting both hands on her knees, she spread her legs and looked at the sweetest pussy he had ever seen. With little peach fuzzy hair, her lips were clearly visible. He dove in, thrusting his tongue in a deep as possible. In and out, he kept tongue fucking her pussy again and again. She grabbed his hair and jammed his mouth into her cunt, staring up at the ceiling and moaning “Ooooooohhhh.” Larry zeroed in on her clitoris now. Damn, in about ten seconds she was wiggling and moaning and gasping, cumming so hard. She squirted pussy juice right into his mouth.

Larry jumped up and stripped off his pants and shorts as quickly as possible. “Fuck my cunt. Fuck my cunt,” kept saying. He held her ankles up and out and then jammed his dick deep into her pussy.

She was soaking wet but still as tight as could be. He hadn’t felt a pussy this tight in a long, long time. He banged her. He banged her cunt, in and out and in and, bam, in again, and back out and back in. Now his head was swaying back and forth, as he moaned and groaned and kept thrusting into her tight, wet, young baby-girl pussy. His orgasm was intense. He forced himself to pull out, and shot sperm all over her tits, and pussy and tummy as he jerked himself off all over her naked body. She fell to her knees, took his penis in her mouth, and sucked him until he went limp in her mouth.

“Oh my God. I can’t believe what just happened,” she said. “Oh my God.” Frantically, grabbing her clothes and putting them on, she kept saying, “Don’t tell anyone. Don’t tell Tina. Don’t tell anyone.”

Larry got dressed just after she did, and told her that he would not tell anyone. “This will be our memory only. And if you want to do it again some day…” Just then, Tina came in.

Susie and Tina left a few minutes later to go celebrate Tina’s twenty-first birthday. Larry drove off in the other direction, replaying the whole thing in his mind. “Did I really just fuck my daughter’s girlfriend?”

Imagination often seems very, very real, and reality sometimes appears as fantasy.


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