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Old 10-03-2001, 07:39 AM
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Wow Sharniqua!!!!! Excellent story...Just the thought of watching somebody have sex is a huge turn on!!
So I look very much forward to part 2!!!
Excellent job!!
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Old 10-03-2001, 08:20 AM
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I'm with you there on the story Diva,

I loved it Sharniqua!! I can't wait for the sequel.
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Old 10-04-2001, 03:34 AM
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Thanx for your kind words.....

I'm in the process of writing the second part now....it will be a getting down to the good stuff part...

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Old 10-04-2001, 07:46 AM
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My Dear and sexy Diva...I hope you realise the sacrifice I am making for you to get the story....The more time Shani spends writing and rewriting her sequels, then proof reading before posting...is less time spent with poorlittle old me....like I said the sacrifices I make......
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Old 10-04-2001, 08:06 AM
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Ahhhh..Bilbo...I am so sorry...but Sharni has to let her creative juices flowing....even in her mind and on paper

But just think sweetie how great it will be when she is done with her sequels!! ( Which I look forward to the juicy stuff )

So I am sure you can keep your hand off of her till she is done!!

But if you can't....take pics ok!!!!!!
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Old 10-05-2001, 12:41 AM
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Sharniqua, they are getting better and better. This last one had me cumming before she did. Can't wait for the next one.
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Old 10-05-2001, 10:39 AM
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Sharniqua...I gave your story a 5!

Hot, exciting and can't wait for more!

You are very talented!
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Old 10-06-2001, 01:34 AM
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Thanx lots for the feedback.....

Just to let you know that Part 4 has been posted....hope its ok

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Old 10-06-2001, 06:35 PM
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Part 4 was great. Are there going to be further adventures?
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Old 10-06-2001, 06:52 PM
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Great to hear that you enjoyed it....

Yep...there will be more parts...i've really enjoyed writing it and still have more ideas to go on with

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Old 10-14-2001, 04:30 PM
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Keep those literary juices flowing.

Just finished reading part 5. Absolutely loved it! Would love for you to continue the series until it's reached its logical conclusion. Great job sharniqua.
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Old 10-17-2001, 08:39 AM
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I read this story last night Sharniqua and I slept like a baby after doing my "thing".

So I thank you for this great story!

Now can you please post part 6
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Old 10-21-2001, 02:56 AM
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Just to let you know part 6 is posted

RipCord- good to hear the story helped you do your 'thing' hope it can continue to do so....

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Old 10-21-2001, 02:39 PM
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Keeps getting better and better

That shower scene in part 6 is to die for! "Love Thy Neighbors" is a keeper for sure. I hope there'll be a part seven? Can't wait to read it, if so.
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Old 10-22-2001, 06:40 PM
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Absolutely love part 6. PLease keep up the good work and continue to share with us. Doing an excellent job.
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