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Old 02-13-2005, 06:45 PM
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Requesting feedback on The Dare:Shannon's Story

Folks;
Well, this is my first story posted on this site, and I was hoping at least a few of you might give me some feedback.
The Dare: Shannon's Story is under "Group sex" or click the link.
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Old 02-13-2005, 07:48 PM
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Old 02-13-2005, 08:29 PM
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Great story. Cant wait to read your next one.



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Old 02-14-2005, 09:33 PM
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Really liked it... Any updates to come???
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Old 02-15-2005, 07:49 PM
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Look in the story itself for 2 clues that should tell you if I plan any additional stories with these three.
Thanks guys for all of the nice comments!
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