BTW for those who care.....I have begun to write Devon a new story...look for it by the end of the week.

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Love...the slowest form of suicide.

*waiting on pins and needles*mmmmmmm not as unpleasant as I thought it might be ... but hurry all the same;)

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The practice of putting women on pedestals began to die out when it was discovered that they could give orders better from there.~ Betty Grable

If I wanted your opinion, I'd remove the duct tape and ask you for it.~ Me
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One man's dream is another man's nightmare~~~~> §¤ Lilith ¤§
~>My Scribbles<~
==>Gone Shopping<== ~Just a Quickie~ *~A Celebration Vacation~* ~Surprises~ Sleeping With the Window Open
What Did You Do Today? Self Defense Class ~Short Sweet Snippets~ § Summer Spin § Story Challenge Submission Pajamas

Lilith,
dropping by, German Steve urged me ... :)
who stole all your smilies? :confused:

Skip,

great story, dense athmosphere, no lengthes, turns me really on! That wicked lady, wow! :).. Nice imagination Dan manages to tame her in the next story.

If you stop mixing up telling from 1st person /3rd person perspective, it will be perfect.

Waiting for your next story ..... shivering with with anticippp....pation! YUM! :)

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Greets,
Bernhard

Groans appreciatively....damn...i know this story has been here for awhile but I just barely got all the way through it. Makes me wanna run about and by laytex clothes and spike heels and a whip....then run back out and find some sweet shy lil thing to turn into my sex slave... Grins wickedly...In my next life I wanna be Devon...

Great story skip, from every perspective ;)

Oh, and I loved finding the kink, Its what prompted me to go in search of this one.

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Have you ever been felt up...Over the panties...no bra...calvins in a ball on the front seat past eleven on a school night?-- John Hughes

HOT!!!

~~~~Swoons~~~~ This is the first chance I've had to read this all the way through and it's got me heading to the shower to take care of a few.....ahem...issues. Incredible Skip

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"Seize the moment. Remember all those women on the 'Titanic' who waved off the dessert cart."~Erma Bombeck

Lilith - Pins and Needles are your fave

Dice - New perspective for ya.....look up from your ankles and say Awwwww :D

Sea Chelle - From one to another, thanks

TxSweet - Thanks!!!

DG - Better late than never...thanks!

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Love...the slowest form of suicide.

A Devon streak has struck me over the last few weeks and I have written 3 more parts to this story. Is anyone interested in more?

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Love...the slowest form of suicide.

yes please

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The practice of putting women on pedestals began to die out when it was discovered that they could give orders better from there.~ Betty Grable

If I wanted your opinion, I'd remove the duct tape and ask you for it.~ Me
<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>
One man's dream is another man's nightmare~~~~> §¤ Lilith ¤§
~>My Scribbles<~
==>Gone Shopping<== ~Just a Quickie~ *~A Celebration Vacation~* ~Surprises~ Sleeping With the Window Open
What Did You Do Today? Self Defense Class ~Short Sweet Snippets~ § Summer Spin § Story Challenge Submission Pajamas

Ohhhh skip im so excited I cant wait for more of this story *Grins*

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More boots look here

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Very interested in more from you skip!

I've read from beginning to end and over again.....it just keeps getting better everytime.

Do go on.........

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Minds are like parachutes. They only work when they are open.

~Thomas Dewar~

Sorry to say, but this is the conclusion here.

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Love...the slowest form of suicide.

Wonderfully told from start to finish. It was like a journey.

Thanks for the good read.

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Shyabusa, the Shy Abuser

"Come to the Dark Side." / "Down for the count." / "I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself..."

she and me make We you see.

Shyabusa ~ Thanks!!

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Love...the slowest form of suicide.