It has been a long time since I wrote an erotic story, wasn't even sure I knew how to anymore. Still a bit unsure if I do! Any comments are welcome.

fzzzy
Your Story was really good.and very hot!

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I love the night
I love the element of danger and the ecstasy of flight,
I love the night
I love to dance with a stranger and to feel his delight,
And when the dancing is through, I kick off my shoes,
And I listen to the beating of his heart

Thanks Rhiannon, I'm glad you enjoyed it, like I said, it's been a long time since I wrote my last erotic story, so it's good to hear the positive comment.

Great work fzzy. So nice to see you writing erotica again.

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Lil .... Good to see you've kept things up to your impecable standards! Thanks, this story in my head kept my eyes sparkling anyway, glad it seemed to have translated to print reasonably well. X's

I think you can get to the story from this link. I haven't done this in a long time, so hope it works!

Hi fzzy

Glad to see you haven't lost the 'magic'. Great piece of storytelling and the ending leaves it open for the next installment. There is more isn't there?

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Strength in depth

I believe your most attractive features are your heart and soul

Wow, get to hear from one of my most favorite men in this whole wide world .... how the heck are ya anyway?

There will undoubtedly be another installment (or two), but at the moment, I'm kinda wallowing in the first fantasy, hard to get beyond that one just yet ... is that what men call refraction time .... something like that anyway.

x's

I'm glad to see you're writing again! I've always enjoyed your attention to detail and not to mention the way your stories have a way of getting me to rise to the occasion!
Thank you for the great read as always!

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"Come to the Dark Side." / "Down for the count." / "I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself..."

she and me make We you see.

Thanks Shy ... it's good to see your comments again!

Wow Fzzy I have missed reading your stories. I to have been away and just getting back nto to writting stories. I hope there will be more to come.

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kleclere ... how the heck are ya?!?! Hope all is going great in your life and thanks for the comments!

Life could be better but able to get back to pixies and writting story has helped make it better. I still think you have some of the hottest story going.

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