Wow! Helluva hot poem there Jen!

Hope you have a few more in your portfolio to share!

Thanks, Musketeer and Darogle, it's nice to have a bit of feedback.
I'm sure that i can come up with some more at some point or another. Goodness knows this site inspires.

My Angel

Feather soft kisses
Raining down on bare skin,
Pausing at an earlobe
tugging gently,
Kissing down the nape of a neck
lightly caressing a pale shoulder,
Pausing at each tender breast
Sucking, nibbling and squeezing
Until I can hardly breath,
Kissing down a smooth stomach
down between my thighs,
drinking in , savoring my very essence.

As we become one,
minds mingle and
bodies meld.......
I close my eyes and lose myself
In the music of heaven.

wonderful addition Pussy Willow!

Beautiful! Very gentle, yet complete.

says it all
 

which is very wonderful. please keep em' cumming ladies :hot:

~ Jen ~

What a superb piece of prose. Loved it, nice detail, and imagery. Keep it up and please post some more. :)


~ thereIam ~
~ boilergirl1 ~
~ musketeer ~
~ darogle ~

thank you for the encouragements and for sharing in what is becoming a delightful thread.

~ Pussy Willow ~

I followed the path all the way to ‘music of heaven’ please continue your story

:)

bump!!!!!!
 

this is worth the read:slurp:

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Vanilla Milkshake

Such a craving
you might fullfill.
A vanilla milkshake
thick, creamy
slowly oozing
down my throat;
sticks to my lips
lingers on my tongue
but most falls
down to my belly
leaving me yearning for more.

~*bump*~

That is so fuckin erotic!

Love it!

Bound By Love
 

With rope she is bound
but that isnt what holds her
she is bound by love
She waits
Eager for my touch
Or the Ice which cools her
The crop which warms her
The love that fills her
I touch her
See the love shine in her eyes
Unseen wings lift her spirit
And i crave her..
Emptiness is filled
Hunger is sated
She captures me
Binds me as I bind her
She has me shackled
Unbreakable bonds, rigid restraint
We float together
Upon the sea of desire
drowning in each others
Needs
Wants
Hopes and dreams...

On a seperate note:

I must say...there are some beautiful poems within this thread!

Thankyou to all who have contributed!

I Love to read the dance of love