My vanity forced me to go and check; not only has it been posted, it already has the red "H" attached! Couple of comments too, one of whom didn't seem to notice my story (as they all are!) is set in the UK!! Never mind.

Amazing the difference the moving of a few commas (and a wee bit of a rant in the comments section!) can have, isn't it? Better go and check the sequel before I submit it I guess. My public demands it, it appears. Pity there isn't a part three . . .

DM

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The selfish, they're all standing in line
Faithing and hoping to buy themselves time
Me, I figure as each breath goes by
I only own my mind