03-21-2003, 06:34 PM
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Dudley vision
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Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: In the shadows of my mind
Posts: 202
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Beautifully Written
Can I just say, "You have a gift for writing!!"
From the begginning we can see that John is a bit on the dominant side, (something I personally love) and we just see that evolve wonderfully. The maid loves to please and to be pleased, but she also willingly submits to John. You played off of their relationship well in the second part, when she had to dust the picture and he was conveniently in the way. You displayed it again in the third part when he makes her finish cleaning with the Maid still in an orgasmic haze and their juices still fresh in her pussy.
I was also wondering if we were ever going see the neighbors show up, but you delivered magnificently as always.
You always know exactly what to deliver. I can't help but repeat again that you are truly gifted!
In short: Wonderfully Orgasmic!!
Keep 'em cumming...
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Shyabusa, the Shy Abuser
"Come to the Dark Side." / "Down for the count." / "I never saw a wild thing sorry for itself..."
she and me make We you see.
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