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Old 05-27-2003, 07:24 AM
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Natasha and Aidan

Great taste for a nice start....Well written BCG.


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Old 05-27-2003, 12:04 PM
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Very good BCG!!!!! Can't wait for more!
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Old 05-31-2003, 01:21 AM
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super start BCG!! Ando is pretty close to Aidan... coincidence??? LOL

Please keep it up!
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Old 06-01-2003, 12:34 AM
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GREAT ADDITION!!

I think I might have to get in on this authoring stuff!
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Old 06-02-2003, 03:41 PM
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Well it only gets better...
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Thanks for the comments so far...
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Old 06-06-2003, 03:14 PM
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Great story

You've got talent!!

This story really got my juices flowing.

Look forward to the next chapter!
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Old 06-09-2003, 09:45 AM
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Very well told story BCG!!! Look forward to seeing more stories from you.
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Old 06-09-2003, 08:24 PM
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Skipthisone, Lilith, Ando3, Holly, fzzy~

Thank you again for the wonderful and encouraging comments. I have always loved to write, but never tried my hand at an erotic story before. Now I just have to get some of these ideas out of my fantasies and into print.

'til my next story,
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Old 07-13-2003, 09:39 AM
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great story

Great story - I only wish I had some experiences as hot as that to write about! Keep up the good writing!
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