01-30-2002, 09:13 AM
|
 |
Passion & Power
|
|
Join Date: Jun 2001
Location: Waiting at the gates of Valhalla
Posts: 5,656
|
|
|
Hi Tammi
Very moving
__________________
Strength in depth
I believe your most attractive features are your heart and soul
|
01-30-2002, 11:40 AM
|
|
|
I had never thought of using poetry in such a wild way. The best way to get to the point across to the reader. Lets have more of this sexy literature. well done all of the poets.
xXx Misancha xXx
|
01-30-2002, 12:36 PM
|
 |
Master's pet tigress
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Midwest, USA.
Posts: 667
|
|
|
The Seduction
~By Lindsay Rae~
I lie awake at the darkest hours of night
I feel the heavy chains of slumber hold me down
As I try to escape my pillowy prison
I shiver, though the room is quite warm
I feel the soft, feathery touch of fingertips
As they glide gently across my skin
Each touch feels like the first time
My breath quickens slightly
As a finger brushes against my nipple
Slowly the fingertips tickle their way up my arm
Leaving goose bumps in their path
They caress my cheek and the side of my neck
Ever so slightly, they travel down my sides
And across my tummy
I can feel the fiery warmth build up inside me
As the fingers play with my curly hair
As if by instinct I part my legs
I offer myself to the sweet seduction
As I have many times before...
__________________
This Space for Rent.
|
01-30-2002, 12:49 PM
|
 |
Mooooo!!!
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Canada
Posts: 830
|
|
|
Beautiful......
beautiful Tigress, sensual and mmmmmm............so erotic
|
01-30-2002, 01:06 PM
|
|
Master's pet tigress
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Midwest, USA.
Posts: 667
|
|
Thank you. 
__________________
This Space for Rent.
|
01-30-2002, 01:16 PM
|
 |
Manwhore
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Pacific Northwest
Posts: 15,495
|
|
Very well spoken Tigress, and sensual as well as erotic.. 
I like it a lot!  |
01-30-2002, 01:42 PM
|
|
Master's pet tigress
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Midwest, USA.
Posts: 667
|
|
Thanks babe. 
__________________
This Space for Rent.
|
01-30-2002, 03:48 PM
|
 |
Oral Freak
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 447
|
|
Wow, there's some fantastic writing posted here! It's so inspiring --- in all the best senses of the word! Hooray for all the PixiePoets!!!
You've all inspired me to drag out some of my writing... It's not exactly erotic, although it hovers on the edge. I guess most of it qualifies more as 'sensual' than as 'erotic' --- hope it's appropriate here anyway.
--- sweetstuff |
01-30-2002, 03:49 PM
|
|
Manwhore
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Pacific Northwest
Posts: 15,495
|
|
If your sketches are any kind of indicator, I'm sure your writing will be well received also! |
01-30-2002, 03:51 PM
|
|
Oral Freak
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 447
|
|
|
the scent of you
the scent of you
drifts into me
delirium
my altered consciousness
telescopes
you become
horizon
foreground
the whole picture
the landscape in your eyes
is suddenly
the only one I see
and the warm heartbeat
of your arm
around me
the gentle weight
anchors me to you
otherwise
I would fly
spinning
out of control
lost in the universe
of your smile
|
01-30-2002, 03:57 PM
|
|
Manwhore
|
|
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Pacific Northwest
Posts: 15,495
|
|
mmmmmmm.... I think I'm melting... That was beautiful and moving Sweetstuff. *sigh* |
01-30-2002, 04:04 PM
|
|
Oral Freak
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 447
|
|
|
your breath
your breath on my neck
my fingers along your spine
my heart in yours
your quivering devotion
my naked elation
your soft skin
your hard tongue
your heartbeat thundering
mine too
my life on fire
my love
I love
the feel of you
my hunger
your excitement
our love
|
01-30-2002, 07:01 PM
|
 |
Senior Member
|
|
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Upstate NY
Posts: 2,272
|
|
|
Hips grinding obscenely.
Orgasmic waves receding.
She smiles happily.
__________________
____________
Nubian
|
01-30-2002, 07:19 PM
|
|
Oral Freak
|
|
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: Ontario, Canada
Posts: 447
|
|
|
Nubian ---
I love your writing! Your poems are so much the opposite of my own in form, but you capture very well the kind of sensuality and vivid imagery that I only aim for... I'm in awe! Please, keep writing, and keep sharing your work!
--- sweetstuff
|
01-30-2002, 07:37 PM
|
|
Senior Member
|
|
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Upstate NY
Posts: 2,272
|
|
Thanks SFC. I am really touched that you enjoy my (admittedly amateurish) attemp at Haiku.
__________________
____________
Nubian
|
| Thread Tools |
Search this Thread |
|
|
|
| Display Modes |
Rate This Thread |
 Linear Mode
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 08:53 AM.
|
