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Old 05-19-2002, 10:13 AM
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My Birthday - A Fantasy

This is the first story I've ever written and completed..I'm terrified to post it but am doing it anyway. It's a tad long so I have to split it into two parts. I'll post the second part immediately following the first. PLEASE Be kind and gentle:D
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What a thoroughly rotten day!! It started out lousy
and went downhill from there. First a flat tire on my
way to work. Then I found out I was passed over AGAIN
for that promotion I've been working so hard for. And
worst of all, today is my birthday and no one noticed!
Not my parents, none of my siblings, none of my
co-workers, and last but certainly not least, my
fiance. I thought I would have at least gotten a phone
call from him. Oh well. No sense feeling sorry for
myself, it does no good anyway.
My arms are full of grocery bags, as well as my
purse, briefcase and my laptop. I can barely maneuver
to get my key in the door. I manage to just get the
door open and dump everything on the kitchen table
right next to the door. Suddenly,before I can turn on
the light, I'm grabbed from behind by a large pair of
leather-covered, extremely strong hands. One hand is
clasped over my mouth and the other covers my eyes.
"Not a word! Or you'll be sorry!"
I nod to show I understand and he slowly releases his
grip on my mouth. The next thing I know I feel a very
silky-feeling cloth cover my eyes and it's tied
securely behind my head. I don't recognize the voice,
but there is something very familiar about the hands.
"I won't hurt you, not if you don't fight me. But I
WILL have my way with you! If you cooperate perhaps
you might even enjoy it!"
I was terrified, yet I could feel myself getting
wet. How can I possibly be getting aroused when my
very life might be in danger? How sick am I?
The "Voice" instructs me to disrobe, "Now! Take
everything off! Now! Right here! Don't strain my
patience or you will pay the price!"
I struggle to undress as fast as I can, leaving my
designer business-wear in a heap on the floor. I'm
shaking so hard I can almost hear my knees knocking. I
know I can hear my heart pounding in my ears. I just
don't know if it's from fear or excitement. I must be
insane!
I feel those hands again. They reach from behind me
and grip my breasts - tightly, pinching my nipples,
pulling them, twisting them.
The "Voice" laughs. "You know you're enjoying it,
you slut! Now move your ass! Get in the bedroom! You
don't need to see - it's your apartment, you should be
able to find your way." I make my way to the bedroom,
stumbling over kitchen chairs, and cat food dishes in
the process. He then instructs me to get on the bed
and to lie on my back.
"Okay bitch, spread 'em!"
"What are you going to do with me? Please don't hurt
me!" I receive no verbal response. My questions were
met with silence.
I felt one foot being gripped by those maddeningly
familiar hands. Then something soft, yet strong, being
wrapped around my ankle...then it was tied to the
bedpost. The same thing was done to the other foot.
When he finished with my feet I was left wide open.
Exposed to the world. The world that at the moment was
only populated by me and "The Voice". I felt so
degraded, so vulnerable and I'm ashamed to admit, so
aroused! This detail was not missed by my captor. I
was startled by a touch "down there." Just a quick run
of his finger between my folds and then I heard him
chuckle to himself. He said nothing but I knew he had something sinister planned and
was thoroughly enjoying my predicament.
Next I felt my hand being ripped way from my breast
where I had vainly tried to preserve some minute shred
of modesty. Again he chuckled to himself and fastened
my wrist to the bedpost with the same soft, slippery,
sensual, strong bands that he used for my feet. Yet
again this was repeated with my other hand.
There I was, spread wide open on my bed like the
meat on an open-faced sandwich.
My mind was reeling! What's happening to me? WHY is
this happening to me? Who is this villain? IS he a
villain? His voice is cruel, his hands are determined
yet gentle. And strangely familiar......
That familiarity plays a most sadistic game with my
mind. Who could this be? And most of all WHY??
Then just as suddenly as he appeared, he seems to
disappear. There is nothing but the sound of my
breathing and my heart pounding and those ever-present
questions in my head.
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Old 05-19-2002, 10:13 AM
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My Birthday - A Fantasy cont'd.

I lay there, shamefully exposed, for what seems like hours
- but was it really? Is anything what it seems to be?
Out of the silence and darkness he is back. I know
it's "him" by his scent. I can't quite make out the
fragrance...is it cologne? No, it's a "clean"
smell....like soap or shampoo. I hear him moving
around but he says nothing. I hear what sounds like he
is undressing. Dear God! What is he going to do to
me??Before the question finishes forming in my mind I
feel
something brushing against my breast....then across to
my other breast. What is it? So soft, so light,
ooooooh god! It's a feather! Oh my god! Now he's
brushing the feather between my tits and down my
belly....ooh....down the inside of my leg to the
bottom of my foot. Oh damn, that tickles! Oooohh, now
he's brushing it up the inside of my other leg. Oh!
Oh! Oh! He's running it up and down my pussy lips! Oh
My God! Oh, it feels so good! Oh! Damn Him! Just as I
was approaching the precipice of ecstasy he stops!
What's this I feel now? Oh God, it feels like...
Like what? Like....like velvet! Oh Wow! He has on
velvet gloves and he's massaging me! He begins at my
wrist - working his way down my arm. Gently stroking
back and forth all the way down to my shoulder, then
around my neck to the other arm, back down to my neck
again. Then with both hands he cups my breasts and
begins to stroke them in a circular motion - ever so
lightly - oohh! Just as I begin to relax and enjoy
the sensation, I feel him roughly pinch my nipples.
OWW!! It hurts like hell, but also feels strangely
exciting. I feel myself getting wet...........again.
"You cheap tramp! Only a tramp or a whore would enjoy
being humiliated like this!" he spat. I begin to
answer but as soon as I open my mouth he silences me
with his velvet-clad hand. "I'm not going to tell you
again! Keep silent or I will gag you! Do you
understand? Just nod if you do."
Naturally, I nod. Then I feel the velvet again. He's
running his maddeningly familiar hands up and down and
around my ribs..then across my belly and down the
outside of my legs and up the insides to my thighs.
He just barely lets his fingers glance across my most
secret place that is now on vulgar display for all to
see. Oh please touch me there!! PLEASE!! He knows
that I want him to touch me there because I'm raising
my hips as he continues to massage the insides of my
thighs. He knows. But he chooses to ignore my desire.
And then he only laughs before he cruelly walks away.
Silence again. And then I sense that he has returned.
He still says nothing but I hear him moving around the
bed. Next I hear a strange sound. At first it sounds
close to my ear but then it moves away. OH GOD!!
He's got a VIBRATOR!! And he's putting it in my pussy!
He shoves it in my hole, and then out to my clit and
then he sticks it inside me again, then back to my
clit. Oh Damn! Oh, it feels so good! But he doesn't
keep it there long enough. Damn Him!! Oh, it's back on
my clit! Oh! OHH! OH GOD!! OH Nooooo! Put it back!!
Put it back!! Damn him, DAMN HIM, he's so evil!! Just
as I'm about to orgasm he stops! Why is he doing this
to me???
Oh no! Now what's he doing? I feel him ON the bed
WITH me!
Ahh, I gasp as I feel his hot mouth on my breast -
and his tortuously familiar hand on the other one.
He takes almost the entire breast into his mouth -
sucking on it as if his mouth were a vacuum cleaner!
Oh god! What a sensation! Then he draws his mouth out
over it until he only has my nipple. He flicks his
tongue all over the nipple while he sucks on it like a
newborn baby.....Ohh yessss! Meanwhile massaging the
other one and pinching the nipple, oh it hurts but
it's a delicious hurt. Then he switches sides. Oh My
Dear God! What exquisite torture!!
He releases my breasts and begins kissing me. UGH!!
No, don't kiss me, you maniac! I don't know where your
mouth has been! But he is insistent. He presses his
lips hard against mine and I feel his tongue demanding
entrance. No, I don't want to!! OUCH!! I feel a slap
on the side of my ass! I understand and immediately
open my mouth - begrudgingly granting him admittance.
His tongue probes, roughly searching for mine. I find
myself responding and even beginning to enjoy his
kiss.
Then he does it again!! DAMN HIM!! As soon as he
senses that I am receiving even the least bit of
pleasure he STOPS! SADIST!!!
Now he's kissing my neck, and then the cleavage
between my breasts - working his way down my
silken-rope-bound spread-eagled body.
He kisses under my breasts, my ribs, my belly,
stopping to run his tongue around my belly-button -
oooh- what a sensation! Then he continues down my
belly. Then down to my leg. He continues kissing and
while he's kissing the inside of the first thigh he begins
stroking the inside of my other thigh. Oh Dear God!!
Not only is he kissing my inner thigh, he begins
running his tongue up and down my thigh. He repeats
this treatment all the way down to my ankle and then
starts up the other leg - Oh My God!! This man is
driving me insane!! And his HANDS! Still so very
familiar. But how is that possible???
Aaagghh! Good Lord!! As he reaches the top of my
thigh he continues his exquisite kisses and goes back
up my belly to my breasts again. Only this time he
covers them with little bitty kisses before taking
each nipple in turn in his mouth. This time biting
each one. Not overly hard, but just hard enough to
create a shot of pain....then back down my now
quivering torso....down, down.....OH! OH SWEET JESUS!!
I feel his tongue in my pussy! Oh no! He's not......Oh
Please Stop!...NO! OOHHH MYYY GODDD!! He
plunges his tongue into my now dripping hole! Oh sweet
ecstasy!!
He fucks me with his tongue. Then he moves that
amazing tongue to my clit - probing for it. Finding
it, he draws it into his mouth - sucking gently on it
and flicking his talented tongue over it.. Oh God, Oh
God! Yesss! Yess! Oh! NOOO! You BASTARD!!! Don't
stop now!!! He's done it yet AGAIN!!! Just as I'm on the
brink of orgasm he stops. He is the cruelest, most
sadistic creature I've ever encountered! And he's
laughing at me!!! "You know you're enjoying every bit
of this. I can tell. Just look at yourself...You're so
fucking wet your sheets are getting soaked!! And you
want to cum so bad you can taste it!" As he spat out
the words "taste it" he rammed his fingers in my
pussy, working them around and then withdrawing them. He
brushes those same dripping fingers across my lips.
"Open your mouth, bitch! Here, then taste it!"
I lick off his fingers only because I'm afraid of what
else he may do to me...But the taste is so different..
So exotic, erotic, and so sexually exciting!! I want
more!! Let me taste it some more!! I lift my hips to him,
hoping he understands.
And he does..."What is it with her? Everything I do
to torture her or degrade her, she actually enjoys it!
It's not supposed to work that way. Well, if that's
what she wants....after all it IS her birthday"
He re-inserts his fingers in me..works them around a
bit more and then brings them to my lips again.
Mmmm...oh soo good! And I just keep getting
wetter! Oh, I'm soo baad!!
Oh no! He's back on the bed with me! What is this beast going to inflict on me now? Ohhh - he's kissing me all over! Oh My God! And he's
kissing me "down there" again - OH DEAR GOD IN HEAVEN!
No, please don't stop!! Oh no!! What's that??? Oh My
God!! It's his cock!! He's going to rape me!!!! No!
Nooooooo!! PLEASE NOOO!!! Anything but that!!!
Suddenly I feel his hand behind my head and then my
blindfold is removed!
OH MY GOD!! YOU!! IT'S YOU!! I CAN'T BELIEVE
IT!! IT'S REALLY YOU!!
"Yes, it's me! Happy Birthday, Darling! I hope you
enjoyed your birthday present. I tried to fulfill your
fantasy. Did I succeed?"
More than you know! More than you'll ever know!! I
LOVE YOU!!
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Old 05-19-2002, 10:20 AM
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What a hot story! I would love a birthday surprise like that.... keep writing!
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Old 05-19-2002, 10:26 AM
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Thank you Lilith!! You are too kind!
In fact without the encouragement I received from you and from two other very special Pixie friends (You know who you are!:D ) I never would have posted it. I'm a nervous wreck right now. LOL
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Old 05-19-2002, 02:36 PM
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No need to be nervous, SS... very erotic & well written... hope you've got more to post
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I liked it very well written, hopefully I'll be seeing more of your work.
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SS, I think you need to KEEP WRITING!

I loved this...and know how nervous you were about posting it.
T'is a lovely story...now go write more. :)
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SS - that was great!! Keep it up..
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Scotz - Thanks so much! You're too kind!

gods_favorite - Thank you very much!

RandyGal - Thanks so much! And without your encouragement
I never would have posted it. You're a good friend!

Vampeyes - Thank you too!

I appreciate the compliments so much. I was simply petrified of posting it. And I thank you all for your encouragement and votes of confidence!
I only have one other story in the works but I'm not happy with it and am just sort of stuck....
As soon as I can get "un-stuck" and get it finished I'll post it.....:D
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What a great story! Thoroughly enjoyable. And absolutely outstanding as a first effort! Can't wait to see more from you!

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I don't know how I missed this one. SS what an amazing story. Well written and very erotic. Keep my going through the whole tihng. I hope to read more of your work soon.
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I don't know how I missed this one. SS what an amazing story. Well written and very erotic. I hope to read more of your work soon.


Oh My, Prophet! I'm stunned! Coming from you, this is such high praise! Thank you soo much!! I guess I'm going to have to get busy on the one I have yet to finish....:o :D

And thank you too, SFC! Your kind words are very much appreciated!
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Oh My, Prophet! I'm stunned! Coming from you, this is such high praise! Thank you soo much!! I guess I'm going to have to get busy on the one I have yet to finish....:o :D


Well thank you. Now I am guess I am going to have to work on my rep again.

Hey didn't anyone tell Sugarsprinkles that I am not that nice of a guy. Somebody must have not sent you that memo.

I can't wait to read another of your tales, and I am sure that I am not the only one too.
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SS, I love the story. Pls keep it coming in~!
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SS - hot story. i loved it :)
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