
02-01-2002, 08:23 PM
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A website I created
Hi everyone. For one of my computer classes I was given an assignment to make a website. So I chose to make a porn site. I have until the end of the semester to have it completed and turned in and I was wondering if I could have a few people check it out and give me suggestions and comments. Now I am going to give a disclaimer (per the teacher) any and all material was either mine, meaning i purchased the pictures, or I downloaded it off other websites. Also, if you take any offense to porn, HA, then please do not go or ask for the address. Umm, well shoot, should I just put the address here? HMMMMMM....well I will just put it here. Thanks for all of your help. Welcome to My World
**just a few quick notes....I did not put any vulgar language on the website so that it is not detected in any search engines, the teacher did not want the vulgar language, and for people who have firewalls. thanks again!!!!
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02-01-2002, 08:33 PM
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Not Bad... I really liked the pic of the day!!
The one thing I prefer on sites like yours are thumbnails...
Other than that it's a really straightforward site without a lot of flashy garbage... (and that's a good thing!) 
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02-01-2002, 08:37 PM
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 ...I do not know how to make pictures into thumbnails....does anyone know how to do this? If so please email me. Thanks
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02-01-2002, 08:45 PM
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I'm not sure, but I think there are thumbnail generators you can download.... I don't know from where though... 
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02-01-2002, 08:54 PM
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I liked it!
Very nice pictures, they are obviously well chosen. And as Aquaman said, the lack of banners and pop-ups makes the site an absolute joy. I don't mind the lack of thumbnails, because I have a cable modem, but to others they would be a definite asset. I suggest you add some stories, they are almost always my favorite item.
BORU
P.S. i did not understand the title of the category, "both pictures" am i missing something?
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02-01-2002, 08:57 PM
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by me putting both pictures up there, it meant both sexes, but in order for me to get away with my assignmne tbeing a porn site i had to leave out such words as:"Lesbian, cock, vagina, sex, (insert favorite sexual word here)". sorry...its kind of low key and pristine. but hopefully i will get an a...thanks
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02-01-2002, 08:59 PM
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Very nice work!!!
I do web-site development myself, as one of a number of part-time jobs, and experience is a wonderful teacher. I thought I'd share a few points, since you asked for constructive criticism --- but none of these should be read as a you-must-do-this order, just as a what-if-you-did-this pondering! So, the comments:
1) I'm with Aquaman on the thumbnails --- those pages with just the 'page1/page 2/page 3' links on them are dead air time in terms of keeping your audience interested. To make them: some photo-manipulation software and some web-creation software will actually do them for you automatically, but if not, it's really easy to do manually. Just open each image, save a copy, and then shrink that copy to a smaller size. (Decide on a size that will give people an idea of what they're getting, but not be so large that the page takes years to load. That size will depend on how many thumbnails you want to put on each page.) Then you make a separate page for each image or set of images, and link from the thumbnails to the pages with the larger pics. It'll take a while to slog through at first, but once you get the hang of it it's pretty mindless and goes quickly... Your viewers will definitely appreciate it!
2) Typo on the front page: it's "category", not "catergory"...
3) Perhaps "uniform" isn't the right word for the pics you put in that section --- I was expecting unifroms like nurses/doctors/firefighters/police/etc. Maybe a word like "costume" would express the idea that these are pics of people dressing up and playing roles a little more clearly...? Alternatively, see comment #4, and consider putting a brief description of the contents of each section, rather than just the title.
4) Okay, so I'm not a porn site expert. But to me, a few words or a title for each picture would be helpful, particularly with the 'famous faces' section --- then, if you were really ambitious, or wanted to really go for the high marks, you could put in some kind of search function so that users could search for certain key words in those descriptions.
5) The "Welcome to my World" title could be made into a graphic (a .jpg is best), which would in turn give you a visual theme to run through the site. Then (again, for extra credit) you could take some graphic element from that title image, and use it for your "back" and "next" links --- if you want a clearer idea of what I'm talking about, PM me and I'll give you the URL of my personal web-site (which, incidentally, has no sexual content whatsoever --- it's about cooking) so you can see what I've done there. I find that the visual theme is very important in making the whole site feel like a single place, and in separating it from outside sites...
6) Wow, you're brave!!! I can't imagine doing a porn site for one of my school projects!!! You have a very open-minded prof, obviously, and a lot of courage for taking risks with your assignments! I'm impressed!!!
7) Keep up the good work, and let us know of any updates you make! I'm sure you'll find lots of willing "lab-rats" to test your creation on...
--- sweetstuff
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02-01-2002, 09:00 PM
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Ooops, just saw your response to Boru --- forget what I said about additional text, in that case...
--- sweetstuff (again)
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02-01-2002, 09:48 PM
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Very impressive! Loved your site added it to my favorites
Thanks Red
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02-01-2002, 09:48 PM
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Great comments sugar free!
ty for the explanation, and I think sugarfree made some excellent suggestions....and managed to do so without being preachy!!!
I suggest perhaps, "both genders" as a title for your "both pictures" category to evade the censors.
BORU
P.S. good luck on the grade, I give you an 'A+'
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02-01-2002, 09:56 PM
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nice site I hope you get a A+++++++++
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02-02-2002, 04:39 AM
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Very nice site Nurse Traci. I have to agree with Aquaman and SFC on a couple of things. I have made a few web pages for friends to advertise their businesses. A couple of them are strippers, so I can understand the frustration of trying to get adult content passed by a teacher. If you use thumbnails, you can add more pics to each page.
Also, changing the title to the pages will help get people to look at certain things. So for instance "Famous Faces" someone might think Celebrities, you could try "Adult Famous Faces", and instead of "Uniforms" go with "Costumes".
And if you decide to add a story page, I would gladly donate a couple of my stories to help you out.
Otherwise, a very nice page with very nice pics on it.
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02-02-2002, 10:29 AM
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Very nice site Traci hope you get that A.
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02-02-2002, 11:53 AM
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Outrageous
You call yourself a nurse!
Ten seconds in there and I had my palpitations back.
Jefferies, my brandy please.
Not impressed!!
(Well put together site. Agree with the page1 comment)
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02-02-2002, 02:32 PM
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A+ because i got very hard at the pics
well laid out ..as said before no rubbish to contend with
simple and strait forward links without popups (excellent)
contents to acommodate all interests
Thumbnails...if you used a photo program to set your pics..you will find an optoin to set them as thumbnails..then load the nails as links
well done will be back to check out more pics when loaded
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